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Steven W. Carabatsos (born October 2, 1938) is an American screenwriter, who was also the
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on ''
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'' between the tenures of
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and
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Early life

Steven W. Carabatsos grew up in Manhattan, where he attended
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on the
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. Following his graduation, he attended
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Screenwriting career

While at Cornell, he wrote a
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for the
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''
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''. Producer
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purchased the script for use, and when he moved onto the college-based drama '' Channing'', he hired Carabatsos to ensure that the scripts remained college oriented. Carabatsos described himself as "technical adviser in charge of rah-rah", and corresponded with his younger brother (then at college) as well as visiting colleges in the Los Angeles area in order to keep up with current trends. Following the departure of
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as
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, Carabatsos was hired as his replacement in August 1966. To welcome him to the production team, the show's creator,
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, decided to prank him. When Carabatsos arrived for his first day, Roddenberry had arranged for a
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to be inflated inside his office, preventing him from opening the door and getting inside. The joke was only revealed after Carabatsos struggled with the door for a while. While his contract stipulated that he would be allowed to write one episode in addition to his re-writing duties as story editor, Carabatsos found it difficult to fit his own writing around his main duties. His first job on the show was to re-write
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's script for "
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" in order to bring it within budget. Ellison later accused Carabatsos of "taking a chainsaw" to the script, with multiple changes made including the addition of the Guardian of Forever and the change to initial setup wherein Doctor
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is overdosed with cordrazine. Roddenberry did not like Carabatsos' version, and asked Ellison to conduct a further re-write. During the production of "
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", Carabatsos was told by producer
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to write an entirely new script, using the same ideas and the same sets. The alternative script was later merged with the original, earning Carabatsos a co-writer credit alongside
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. Carabatsos' tenure as story editor on ''Star Trek'' did not last long, and he was replaced by
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, but his departure left him able to write his own script as previously contracted. Carabatsos credited Roddenberry for the idea for "Operation: Destroy!", and he turned in the first version of the outline on December 15, 1966. A second draft was dated January 19, 1967, but after it was sent to the executives at
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, they responded that they wanted to see faster pacing. The script was subsequently re-written, first by Fontana, and later by Roddenberry, becoming " Operation -- Annihilate!" in the process. Following his departure, Carabatsos worked on several different television series as a writer and wrote the screenplays for films such as ''
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'', a
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live-action film released in 1980, and ''
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* {{DEFAULTSORT:Carabatsos, Steven W. 1938 births Living people Writers from Manhattan Cornell Law School alumni Hunter College alumni American science fiction writers American television writers American male television writers Screenwriters from New York (state)