In written English usage, a comma splice or comma fault is the use of a
comma
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to join two
independent clause
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Independent clauses can be joined by using a semicolon or ...
s. For example:
The comma splice is sometimes used in literary writing to convey a particular mood of informality. In the United States it is usually considered an error in
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An individual's ...
. Some authorities on
English usage
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consider comma splices appropriate in limited situations, such as informal writing or with short similar phrases.
Overview
Comma splices are rare in most published writing but are common among inexperienced writers of English.
The original 1918 edition of ''
The Elements of Style
''The Elements of Style'' is an American English writing style guide in numerous editions. The original was written by William Strunk Jr. in 1918, and published by Harcourt in 1920, comprising eight "elementary rules of usage", ten "elementary p ...
'' by
William Strunk Jr.
William Strunk Jr. (July 1, 1869 – September 26, 1946) was an American professor of English language, English at Cornell University and author of ''The Elements of Style'' (1918). After revision and enlargement by his former student E. B. White, ...
advises using a
semicolon
The semicolon or semi-colon is a symbol commonly used as orthographic punctuation. In the English language, a semicolon is most commonly used to link (in a single sentence) two independent clauses that are closely related in thought. When a ...
, not a comma, to join two
grammatically complete clauses, except when the clauses are "very short" and "similar in form", for example:
Comma splices are similar to
run-on sentence
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Typol ...
s, which join two
independent clause
An independent clause (or main clause) is a clause that can stand by itself as a ''simple sentence''. An independent clause contains a subject and a predicate and makes sense by itself.
Independent clauses can be joined by using a semicolon or ...
s without any punctuation and without a
coordinating conjunction
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such as ''and'', ''but'' ''for'', etc. Sometimes the two types of sentences are treated differently based on the presence or absence of a comma, but most writers consider the comma splice as a special type of run-on sentence. According to ''
Garner's Modern English Usage
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'':
Comma splices often arise when writers use
conjunctive adverb
A conjunctive adverb, adverbial conjunction, or subordinating adverb is an adverb that connects two clauses by converting the clause it introduces into an adverbial modifier of the verb in the main clause. For example, in "I told him; thus, he know ...
s (such as ''furthermore'', ''however'', or ''moreover'') to separate two independent clauses instead of using a coordinating conjunction.
In literature
Comma splices are also occasionally used in
fiction
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,
poetry
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, and other forms of literature to convey a particular mood or informal style. Some authors use commas to separate short clauses only. The comma splice is more commonly found in works from the 18th and 19th century, when written prose mimicked speech more closely.
''
Fowler's Modern English Usage
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'' describes the use of the comma splice by the authors
Elizabeth Jolley
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and
Iris Murdoch
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:
Journalist
Oliver Kamm
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Early life and career
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writes of novelist
Jane Austen
Jane Austen (; 16 December 1775 – 18 July 1817) was an English novelist known primarily for her six major novels, which interpret, critique, and comment upon the British landed gentry at the end of the 18th century. Austen's plots of ...
's use of the comma splice, "Tastes in punctuation are not constant. It makes no sense to accuse Jane Austen of incorrect use of the comma, as no one would have levelled this charge against her at the time. Her conventions of usage were not ours."
The author and journalist
Lynne Truss
Lynne Truss (born 31 May 1955) is an English author, journalist, novelist, and radio broadcaster and dramatist. She is arguably best known for her championing of correctness and aesthetics in the English language, which is the subject of her ...
writes in ''
Eats, Shoots & Leaves
''Eats, Shoots & Leaves: The Zero Tolerance Approach to Punctuation'' is a non-fiction book written by Lynne Truss, the former host of BBC Radio 4's '' Cutting a Dash'' programme. In the book, published in 2003, Truss bemoans the state of punct ...
'' that "so many highly respected writers observe the splice comma that a rather unfair rule emerges on this one: only do it if you're famous." Citing
Samuel Beckett
Samuel Barclay Beckett (; 13 April 1906 – 22 December 1989) was an Irish novelist, dramatist, short story writer, theatre director, poet, and literary translator. His literary and theatrical work features bleak, impersonal and tragicomic expe ...
,
E. M. Forster
Edward Morgan Forster (1 January 1879 – 7 June 1970) was an English author, best known for his novels, particularly ''A Room with a View'' (1908), ''Howards End'' (1910), and ''A Passage to India'' (1924). He also wrote numerous short stori ...
, and
Somerset Maugham
William Somerset Maugham ( ; 25 January 1874 – 16 December 1965) was an English writer, known for his plays, novels and short stories. Born in Paris, where he spent his first ten years, Maugham was schooled in England and went to a German un ...
, she says: "Done knowingly by an established writer, the comma splice is effective, poetic, dashing. Done equally knowingly by people who are not published writers, it can look weak or presumptuous. Done ignorantly by ignorant people, it is awful."
Notes
References
Further reading
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* {{cite news , title=The dreaded comma splice , url=https://www.economist.com/blogs/johnson/2012/01/punctuation , newspaper=
The Economist
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, date=10 January 2012
External links
''The Elements of Style'' full text of Strunk's 1918 edition
English grammar
Punctuation